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This was a wild ride, I like how you brought all the prompt elements together! Well done!

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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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I need more of this story!!!!!!

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Loved it! Complete plot twist. Poor Matty better try tinder lol!!

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I love the idea of unfiltered water making gym patrons 'trip balls'! I would also like more of this story. What else is Matthew the slacker going to discover plot wise as the consequences of his inactions come round to bite him back when he least expects them to?

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Oh my! What is going to happen to Myra and Eddy? Where is Marty going? Next chapter better come quick!

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The image you made for the cover is amazing! Creative story!!!

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